She’s halfway across. At the other end he watches. She has a feeling he’s going to jump on the wooden bridge. “It’s only a joke!” he’ll say. Idiot. She loves him. She wants to forgive him, but he needs to say sorry. #fiction #zappl-fiction
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This is a follow up story to my 50 word story "Sorry", based on @mydivathings' #365daysofwriting challenge. If you haven't [read it, please do,(@felt.buzz/sorry-an-original-work-of-fiction-for-the-365daysofwriting-challenge-told-in-precisely-fiftywords) it is written from the other person's perspective (and you can also see the picture prompt the story was based on.
The first part was posted in Zappl and is 240 characters long (including tags). I then edited the post on steemit to add the bits below the three dots. You can read more about @mydivathings' announcement here @mydivathings/calling-all-fiction-writers-and-announcement-i-take-up-the-role-of-a-zappl-community-influencer
EDIT: I think, that by editing this post on steemit and making it longer I have killed my zappl post! Will try again tomorrow!