A Nest of Vipers (Fantasy Micro-fiction)

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“What is it you want?”

Snake eyes followed his every twitch as he flexed against his bonds.

“Shiftsss little rabbit. Ease your aches and pain from the cruel binding snare.”

A lithe tongue flicked out tasting the damp air.

“What do I want? Blood and salty meat to rot in my guts like pestilence.”

Iron scales writhed and changed as the snake reared up. Scales flowed, changing into corpse white flesh. Two heaving breasts burst from the wilting skin, nipples erect like fiery pips.

Its charnel breath hit him. Venomous fangs dripped ichor on his cheek. His tears flowed and he dared to look back into those slit eyes.

Her face was full like a plump apple, smile like a rotten wound. Strong hands grasped his biceps. He looked down. She pushed up against him, the soft yield of her flesh pulsed through him as pressure built. He felt iron coils constricting his legs.

She bit down hard on his neck.

Blood erupted.

She drank.


Thodor strode past groaning prisoners. Some screamed for mercy, others vomited blood. His robes whipped up a wall of silence.

He hated to hear the meat complain.

The Nāga reared up from its coils.

He held out a shining vial, empty but for the enchantment's light. She opened that wide smiling mouth and spurted a pellet of vomit into the vial.

“Plenty more where that came from master.”

The college would gain enough essence for a thousand potions this night.

The end.

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This is my entry into @jayna's Micro-fiction contest. This awesome contest challenges you to write a piece of flash fiction to a constrained word count of no more than 250. This forces the writer to edit and consider their story to find that perfect economy of words. It is a great creative exercise for any serious writer. I managed to edit this piece down to 246 words.


If you would like to read more of my fantasy fiction, please check out the links below to find stories of mystery and magic both long and short.

Forbidden Fruit

The Gelded One

The Duties of a Court Wizard

The Blazing Heart of Danko

In the Lap of the Gods

Divine Intervention

Astral Echoes

The Madness of the Gods

Life Will Out

The Dream of Life

The Diary of a Wizard

All images used in this post are creative commons licence, source linked below image. If you have enjoyed reading this short story, you can check out similar work on my homepage @raj808. Thank you.

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