Awakening - Day 161: 5 Minute Freewrite (part 2) - Prompt: Yellow

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This is the second freewrite in my experiment to see if I can create an ongoing story from the prompts each day. The general premise of the story idea was inspired by a comment I left at @freewritehouse competition post Ongoing Stories. The idea is that a narrator/character is trapped inside a perpetual trail of prompts. Each day I will begin with a paragraph from the previous freewrite to create continuity.
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I saw my face, flop limply to the ground as the prey was dropped. Smelled the copper blood as I licked my jowls and bent my head to pick up the meat by the broken neck. Fierce thumping heartbeat struck a rhythm in my head as the predator's victory song wound its way through every fiber of my being and I watched a crimson stream trickle between bulging eyes. Life infused me, I would eat tonight.

Follow link for part 1: Incarnation - Day 160: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: Tiger

Yellow light spattered the inside of my eyelids as consciousness dawned in my drained body. I opened my eyes slowly. The sun settled on the horizon like an orange hanging from the sky, ripe with the excesses of the day. An eye of fire winking in the hazy daze of the day's end. I peeked to the side through my sunglasses and memory seeped back as I stared at Isabella. She looked amazing in that bikini, she eclipsed the sun with her dazzle and I felt the previous nights excesses as a dull ache in my swim shorts.

That predator's hunger, an aching delight in my belly, lingered as the ghost of the memory of the blood coursed its way through me. An image flashed before my mind's eye - ripping my own face to pieces with powerful jaws, saliva mingling with blood in pink foam. What a fucking mental dream. I looked at the foam-flecked waves, I blame last nights mojitos and the myriad of recreational chemicals consumed. Only two hours of sleep, my head felt fuzzy and everything ached. I sat up. The beach stretched away, a crystal white ribbon calling me to full wakefulness.

Where am I?

Who am I?

To be continued...

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This post is in response to @mariannewest freewrite writers prompt which can be found here. The picture is from unsplash.com creative commons licence, please follow link to credit. If you have enjoyed this short fiction you can check out my other work on my homepage @raj808.
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