Here it is. My entry into this weeks challenge for Finish the Story Contest hosted by @bananafish. Kept going by you, the brave writer.
by @gaby-crb
Kayla’s boots hit the ground. The dry earth scattered into dust clouds as she strode across the front of the house. Manny was late again.
The harsh sun beat down against her brown skin. She looked off into the distance, the heat haze sat above the plain, rippling the sight of the far off mountains.
She lifted her arm, checking her watch. The sun reflected across the scratched screen. She ran her finger over the deepest scratch. It had still worked after her accident.
A young boy came hurtling out of the front door and blindly ran straight into her. The force knocked them both to the ground.
She fell hard. Her limbs scraped against loose stones and the scorched dirt.
“What in the devil are you playing at?”
She got up quickly, patting herself off in the process.
The young boy sat still. Tears rolling down his dirty cheeks. He coughed as he struggled to breathe, the fine dust getting into his lungs.
Manny stepped onto the veranda and placed his hands on his hips. His shirt hung open and his hat tilted on his head.
Kayla shook her head at the sight of him. She had known Manny her entire life but she was always surprised to see him so relaxed at his home.
“This your boy Manny?”
“Aye, that be Thomas.”
“He make yer’ late then?”
Manny walked down the front steps and helped his son up. Thomas took the offered hand reluctantly.
Kayla chuckled to herself.
“Better bring him with us. ‘Bout time he learned the family trade.”
Manny and Thomas followed Kalya towards her truck. The truck smelled of licorice and sawdust. The engine rattled into life. Thomas slid into the centre. His eyes still pooling with tears.
Manny opened up a hip flask, taking a sip. He growled as the harsh liquid hit his throat. He passed it to Kayla, she drank as she drove across the open land.
“What them tears about then?”
She asked as she passed the flask back.
Manny laughed. “He got a clip round the ear for talking cheek to his mother, didn’t ya’ boy?”
Kayla gripped the wheel tighter as the truck bounced over the rough terrain.
“Well, that seems rightly deserved then. Ya’ don’t talk like that to your ma kid, ya’ just don’t.”
The truck swayed as the tires followed the grooves and tracks of the land. Thomas was the most affected by the force, having spent very little time in vehicles of any kind. He watched as the truck traveled through a river, unaffected by the water.
Manny lit up a cigarette and tilted his head back as he exhaled. The smoke filled the air quickly, Thomas started coughing.
“Quit it will ya manny. The kid got weak lungs or summit’?”
“He’s a weaklin’ alright.”
Manny laughed as he clapped his son on the back.
MY ENDING
Flicking the cigarette out of the truck, Manny took another swig from the flask. The liquor went down more smoothly.
Kayla pulled into the back of the house they just arrived at and shuts of the engine.
Manny handed Kayla the flask and got out of the car. His boots sunk into soft mud. He looked over toward the house spotting the busted spigot. He picked up Thomas and set him down on the dry dirt.
"Watch yer step, boy. Track mud in the house means a switch for you when we get home."
Thomas looked down at the ground.
"I didn't hear ya, boy."
"Yes, pop."
Kayla grabbed a shovel, a pick axe, and a bag from the back of the cab.
"Do ya have to be so hard on 'im, Manny?'
"It's the only way he'll learn."
Kayla led the way. The place is littered with inflatable beach balls from a party a few nights ago. She kicked them left and right.
When they step on the porch, Kayla sets the bag on the table and sifts through it. She pulled out three masks.
One she handed to Manny. He put his on.
One she handed to Thomas. "You need to keep this on the entire time. Your pop's name is Roof. Mine is Vega. Yours is Scramble. Got it?"
Thomas nodded his head to affirm he understood. He coughed behind the mask and scratched his head.
"What's my name, Scramble?" asked Manny.
"Roof."
"Good boy."
The three entered the house. Kayla led them up a stair case to the second story, passed two doors on her right, and entered the third door she came to on her left.
There, in the middle of the room, was a man tied to a chair with ropes, chains, and locks holding him in place. There was no food or water laid out for him. He had piss and shit himself.
Manny pushed Thomas into the room when he froze after seeing the man had black duck tape wrapped around his head covering his mouth.
Kayla dropped the tools to the floor. She shrugged her shoulders and wrinkled her face. "Oops. I know how much you hate scuffed floors."
The man tied-up grunted.
"Stop messing around, Vega."
"All seriousness and no play makes for a dull afternoon."
Manny placed Thomas next to the bed and squeezed his shoulder to let him know to stay put. Manny then opened a window to let the air filter through.
Manny addressed the tied-up man. "Are you ready to play ball?"
The man grumbled something inaudible.
"Oh, right. Forgive me." Kayla pulled out the small knife strapped to her side. She cut a hole in the duck tape for him to talk through.
The dust in the air looked like snowflakes falling in winter. The man sneezed.
"Thanks for letting in all the dust." he said. His eyes looked up and to the left. "You win. It's better than being buried."
"I knew you'd come to your senses sooner rather than later," Manny said. "You won't miss this place after you've sign the papers. You'll be enjoying a life with your family. And here I thought we were going to have to do some digging."
Kayla and Manny chuckled.
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