"In the club" a five minute freewrite

This is the freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (@mariannewest/day-497-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-in-the-club-1551405316)

Today’s prompt is:

in the club

I felt the music pound my body as I walked into the club. The place wasn't packed, not yet, but there were enough people that the place didn't feel like an empty warehouse. And enough people that I wouldn't be noticed. I weaved my way up to the bar. Standing next to this tall blond haired guy who was fiddling with a wallet I signaled to the barman and asked for a bottle of water.

"I was next," Tall Blond said. I gave the barman a note, took the water and turned and looked up at the guy.

Boy, he was tall.

"Well, you are now," I said, waving away the barman's offer of change. I started to walk away but felt a hand clamp itself on my shoulder.

"You ain't going nowhere," Tall Blond said.

"Leave him Gaz," I heard a voice say. I looked around Tall Blond to find an attractive looking brunette, considerably shorter than Tall Blond. I smiled at her.

"Good evening," I said.

As usual I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):

Can I ask you a favour?

There are 8 STEEM fiction writers who are about to publish a book of short stories.

They are:

@janenightshade

@improv

@felt.buzz

@jeezzle

@manoldonchev

@stinawog

@giantbear

@blueeyes8960

8 never before published (not even on STEEM!) stories with a supernatural twist. We are publishing the book under @steemfiction and it will soon be available on Amazon.

So what is the favour?

Would you please follow the @steemfiction account and help us publicise the book?

We want to promote Steem and it’s value to readers AND writers (as well as our book, of course!)

Read more here: @steemfiction/introducing-steem-fiction-the-collaborative-writing-group-that-publishes-on-amazon-com

Thanking you all in advance, my lovely friends!

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