The Stitch Up - Short Story

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"Just remember... Snitches get stitches, right?"

"Yeah Callum, you don't need to worry about me."

I stare that old bastard right in the eye. His shoe-leather face impassive, wrinkled from too many weekends on that yacht in Costa del Nostra.

These old school gangsters are all the same. Strong stare, firm handshake, a bit of the old 'dog and whistle' rhyming from back in the day. They eat that shit up. Trust is a mugs game, easy to manipulate if you take the time to read the tells.

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London's anemic sky infuses her skin. She wraps one hand over the other in a constant dance as I nod.

"Has Denton told you what the score is Gal?"

"Whistle when the Pandas arrive, right?"

"You got it? Whistle loud, like you've spotted a John."

Three

Her eyes shine as she scratches her arms.

Two

"What about...."

One

"the money?"

Clockwork, the mindset of a junkie.

"Don't worry Gal. You'll get your money, after the job."

I lean in toward her stroking her cheek. She hugs herself, a parody of vulnerability. I fucking hate junkies. Never again.

"You twitching then Gal?"

She nods.

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Screeching and the smell of burning rubber. Flashing lights. Bitter rain splashes technicolor explosions off the tarmac.

Where was that whistle.

PC plod slams me on the car bonnet. A shoe-leather face eclipses the lights and a hand slams down next to me.

"Everyone has to do some time Dan. Just remember, snitches get stitches."

The end.

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This is my entry into @jayna's Micro-fiction contest. This awesome contest challenges you to write a piece of flash fiction to a constrained word count of no more than 250. This forces the writer to edit and consider their story to find that perfect economy of words. It is a great creative exercise for any serious writer which I recommend to everyone, also a lot of fun as well 😉 I decided to stretch myself and go for an exact 250 words, which I managed after a few edits.

London slang terms:
A Panda is a police car & A John is a person who buys the services of a prostitute.

The pictures used in this post are creative commons licence and were sourced from pixabay.com, please follow the links 1 & 2 to credit. If you have enjoyed reading this crime flash fiction, please consider reading my longer series written over a year ago called 'Dirty Old Town'. I didn't finish this series in the end, with just one part left to write life took over. Please let me know if you would like to see a concluding part 5. Thank you.

Dirty Old Town- Part 1

Dirty Old Town- Part 2

Dirty Old Town- Part 3

Dirty Old Town- Part 4


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