Trains - Original Poem

I watch the trains passing by
and they all look the same.
But there is one I recognize,
a piece of chapped paint
next to the second door
and a slightly different sound.

I stare at faces as they come and go,
reliving one memory in my mind:
the moment when you took your bag and a guitar.
Your entire world, everything you have
but there was one thing missing,
my hand in your hand…

My courage failed me and I stayed
on that train station, empty hands,
watching you go away.
Before you waved the last goodbye,
you took your keys and made a scratch
next to the second door
on that train with a different sound,
so I can recognize it when I come back.
I still watch the trains passing by…

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As always, your opinion, advice and suggestion on this or any of my previous poems is highly appreciated. I am new at writing poems, this is my 4th one, so any feedback would be helpful! :)

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My previous poems:

You Smile With Your Eyes

Magic World

Storm

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