My First Novel: "They Didn't See It Beneath Them" - All 12 Chapters (Original Story)

More than 200 followers later, I've decided to post the entirety of my first novel with all of the links to the previous posts I had made on Steemit over 3 months ago. If you enjoy the story, please feel free to leave me a comment on any of my newer unrelated posts, or message me in steemit.chat to @verbal-d

If you like underwater deep sea action stories with monstrosity-type ancient creatures, which are all based on evidential existence, which are now deemed extinct, then this is a quick and thrilling read for you. I've gotten positive feedback from the community before about this short novel. My good friend @papa-pepper said he absolutely loved it, so much so that he waited awhile before reading the last chapter because he didn't want it to end.

My other great friend @dreemit read it in its entirety in one day and felt the rush of the action drove the storyline with excitement. @therealpaul started it recently in one day and reached the 8th chapter and said he really enjoyed it so far, so I'm really grateful to have been getting recent encouraging feedback on this story. I'm definitely looking for more engagement on this story as I'm still deciding whether or not I shall continue with a new timeline sequel/follow up installment, and I'm also working on some other aspects of this project as well.

Please let me know your thoughts, enjoy the adventure awaiting you.

Chapter 1: Ferocious Fishing
Chapter 2: Unlucky Timing
Chapter 3: A Very bad Choice
Chapter 4: A Gutsy Giving

Chapter 5: A Single Stroke From Death
Chapter 6: A Fast Escape And An Even Quicker Retreat
Chapter 7: The Other Powerful Predator
Chapter 8: The Co-Motion In The Ocean

Chapter 9: An Easy An Helpless Meal
Chapter 10: More Drones And The Mother Blue Whale
Chapter 11: The Whale Wall And The Disappearing Act
Chapter 12: The Megalodon Meets The...



Thank you for reading this post in its entirety, I hope you can take something from this for what it's worth.


I'll still be continuing accepting donations until I can reach my goal to fly out to america with my children and wife to visit my family as it is very urgent indeed.



I've raised $1069 and .97 cents of Steemit Currency in total from both My Posts and Donations from Steemit Community Members this 2017 forward and $00.00 in US Dollar Donations so far towards my goal of $ 6,000.00 (Six Thousand) US Dollars and will keep everyone updated with every new future post that I submit.
This total amount will not only include donations I've received to the Paypal account I've provided: [email protected], but it will also include the Steemit Currency that I accrue/receive from all of my personal posts starting the 1st of January of 2017 forward calculated after a 48 hour time frame is finished for the payout cycle of each post to avoid miscalculating the fluctuating price of Steemit Currency.



For more information on that, please check my New Year's/Happy Bday Post

Thanks sincerely again in advance for all your help, anything and everything helps.


A SPECIAL THANKS TO ALL GENEROUS AND GIVING DONORS HERE FROM THE STEEMIT COMMUNITY!
@fulltimegeek, @papa-pepper, @scammymcspambot, @prufarchy, @trevor.george, @dreemit, @inphiknit, @hopehuggs, @jedau, @sumsum, @edgarstudio, @the-future


All Gifs used from Giphy.com

Next Post coming tomorrow

My very own wonderful gif logo provided to me by the generous and kindhearted @papa-pepper Thanks again very much!

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