Robbed Time - Freewrite (part 3) - Prompt: Ash

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This is the third freewrite in my experiment to see if I can create an ongoing story from the prompts each day. The general premise of the story idea was inspired by a comment I left at @freewritehouse competition post Ongoing Stories. The idea is that a narrator/character is trapped inside a perpetual trail of prompts. Think 'quantum leap' in freewrite world and you're half way there 😉 Each day I will begin with a paragraph from the previous freewrite for continuity.
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I looked at the foam-flecked waves, I blame last nights mojitos and the myriad of recreational chemicals consumed. Only two hours of sleep, my head felt fuzzy and everything ached. I sat up. The beach stretched away, a crystal white ribbon calling me to full wakefulness.

Where am I?

Who am I?

Awakening - Day 161: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: Yellow

"What do you mean baby? You don't know who you are, that's fucked up."

Her eyebrows arched as she looked at me, those umber eyes drank my soul away. I couldn't handle how much I wanted her right now.

"Just what I say, I don't even know where we are right now."

"What did you take?" Her hand came to rest on my arm, burning like fire, like sunburn in a cool sea or a pill hitting the back of the throat.

"We're in Acapulco hunny. You know what my name is right?" Brown eyes flashed, as she pulled away.

"Yeah, of course, Isabella." I lent into her and kissed her. Breasts cushioned the beat of our hearts, muffling the rib-cage speakers, a bass line running a synchronous Rubato.

I disentangled myself from her and pleaded with her, the blue of my eyes reflecting in her pupils. Where had this robbed time gone?

"And my name?" She looked at me incredulously.

"Your name is Ash." She hunched up regarding me sidelong. "You're the DJ at Mojito discotheque, you honestly don't remember?"

To be continued...

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This post is in response to @mariannewest freewrite writers prompt which can be found here. The picture is from pixabay.com creative commons licence, please follow link to credit. If you have enjoyed this short fiction you can check out my other work on my homepage @raj808 or follow links below to previous parts in this ongoing freewrite story.
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